• Chữa bài IELTS Task 2

    • Nobodyylam

      Participant
      December 10, 2015 at 7:37 pm

      Topic : Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get job straight after school

      After graduating from high school, students could look for an occupation but the others pursue higher education to get an academic degree. Many people believe that continuing to study at a university will be get a better job, whereas other students think that getting a job is better.
      Working after leaving school is a good choice for whom don’t want to study anymore. When they get a job, they could earn money and live independently of their family. Especially with the poor family, the parent couldn’t afford for the children to study higher, so having a stable income is essential requirement. Furthermore, getting a job earlier, they gain more experiences than others and obtain a great number of skills that university have never taught. If they work well and get more money, they will married and settle down. At that time they still could apply to study at university, when their work require and don’t worry about the course fee. In case everything is smooth, they can afford a house and get promotion.
      On the other hand, if you get higher-level qualification, it has a lot of beneficial. Unless studying university or college, you couldn’t work some particular fields. For example, doctor is a specialist job, the unique choice is graduated a medical university. In addition, the employer always favor labors who are trained adequately as well as the job market is very competitive nowadays. For this reason, almost students would apply to university or college to obtain a higher education, thay will have an obvious advantage to get a better opportunities and high salaries.
      In collusion, qualification is important to have many choice in the future work, It doesn’t mean you won’t success if you leave school and go to work.

    • Hoangvu

      Participant
      December 12, 2015 at 1:26 am

      Edited essay. Next time, please save your essay in Microsoft office word format for the sake of convenience.

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