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Some people think it is more important for government to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on the treatment of people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Chào bạn
Cho mình xin hỏi thêm về dạng bài opinion nhé
Mình có tham khảo clip nay “https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l6fl6PUcOwI” về câu hỏi 2 vế
Bạn đó khuyên mình nên trả lời cả 2 vế
VD: the use of mobile phone is as antisocial as smoking, Smoking is banned in certain places so mobile phone should banned like smoking . To what extent do u agree/ disagree?
intro: …… . while i accept that the use of mobile phone is antisocial in some ways. i believe that it is more advantageous and thus should not be prohibited.
Body1: mặt hại của mobile phone
body2: mặt lợi
Conclusion

Cho mình hỏi dạng này là trả lời balence đúng không bạn
Nếu mình muốn trả lời chỉ 1 hướng thì viết sao cho dủ 2 vế đây bạn
Mong sớm nhận được phản hồi sớm từ bạn. Cám ơn bạn nhiều
Thân

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có phải dạng câu 2 vế ng ta muốn mình trình bày ý kiến theo kiểu balance không bạn