Chữa bài IELTS Task 2
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Topic: Some people think that being born to a poor country is a bad luck while others believe that it only helps fuel one’s aspiration to succeed. Dicuss both views and give your opinion.
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Although many people are convinced that being born to a impoverished country is unlucky; other hold a totally opposite opinion. This essay will discuss both points of view and present my own opinion.There are a rich variety of reasons why people hold a belief that third countries’ citizens are disadvantaged than other countries ones. Firstly, the shortage of food is the main issue that poor people always concern on top of the heads every single day of their lives. As a result, the whole family have to work all day in order to feed their emty stomachs at the end of the day, for example, in some African countries, parents did send their childen to factory to work as a full-time worker while children as the same age in developed country only have to care about homework. Secondly, school is a unfamiliar term with children here because learning is a secondary need stood behind basic ones, such as eating, sleeping. Having not enough money to pay for tuition fee and school supplies lead to this sadly situation.
However, other people do not think that living condition can form the future of one person but their own effortness. Thousands years of human evolution shows that people develop and complete their self when the habitat changes in the direction of difficulty and deprivation. In 21st century, there are also many people who come from third-country become success and popular all over the world. Besides, watching their family have been stuggle to survive day by day is also a powerful motivationto succeed in the future.
In conclusion, I am more favour of the former opinion because of the above reasons. Ideally, developed and developing countries should joint their hand to help children in poor country can go to school and have three meals everyday
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