[HANG]

Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to get a satisfying career life than those who frequently change jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people argued that deciding their career path at an early aged and stay persistent in pursuing it to gain satisfaction job rather than frequently job hoppers. While nobody can deny the benefits of staying longer at the same company, I believe that job hopping and temporary jobs give an equally rewarding experience.
On the one hand, people are aware of their personal interests in career path which lead to a satisfying working life is beneficial some ways. Firstly, from early childhood, many people had have an overall picture of their work field what they will pursue in the future and this will instill in them enormous motivation and persistence to gain their goals. For example, many children dream of becoming scientists, they have to nurture their ambition and devote efforts to gaining the relevant qualifications and undertake years of training. Besides, people who are loyal to a company will have various opportunities for career advancement. They will be highly value and be promoted to higher position by manager. This brings them about a satisfaction to their career life.
On the other hand, there are a variety reasons why people tend to choose to change their job after working longer at the same company. Firstly, switching jobs allows workers to escape dead-end jobs and continue to learn and grow different skills in their professional. They will be exposure with new colleagues and working environment that shows them how to do things differently. This might help many job-seekers satisfy to the desire for adventure. Secondly, many people have a tendency to try on diverse jobs before they figure out the jobs what they are passionate about. When they love their work, they will work hard and maintain their enthusiasm in their new role.
In conclusion, although working longer in one organization is more beneficial for people’ career life, I believe that job switching helps people achieve job satisfaction.

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[Phượng Anh]

your essay is overall good.

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