Chữa bài IELTS Task 2
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The responsibility of bringing up children should be shared equally between mother and father. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that both mother and father are equally responsible for raising their children in a family. I strongly agree with this statement as children need to learn balanced conceptions from both parents, and they will also share their loves equally to their mother and father.It has to be an equal effort of both mother and father to bring up a child with balanced conceptions in terms of different ideas between genders. To be more specific, when a woman singularly raises her boy, he will become emotional towards most things when he grows up. By contrast, a grown-up son will always follow the logic and show no emotions if he is nurtured only by his dad. For example, a study showed that the majority of young students who had been raised by single fathers in their childhood did not have empathy for the poor, and they would not give away their money to help the in-need in any circumstances.
Another reason for the share of responsibility between two parents in a family is to make their children love them equally. In other words, children usually have a tendency to show great affections towards the ones who interact with them frequently. For instance, most children in Seoul would prefer to have dinners and moments with their mothers because their fathers rarely spent any time with them when they were at very young ages. These children even found it extremely strange and awkward whenever they had to have a conversation with their fathers.
In conclusion, it is indeed necessary to share the responsibility of bringing up children between parents because the young need balanced lessons from opposite views between sexes, and they will also become more intimate to both parents equally.
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