Chữa bài IELTS Task 1
The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows howthese causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words.
The given table compares how soil degradation left consequences on different fields in certain areas whereas the pie chart illustrates reasons for this recent global issue during 1990s.
Overall, it can be seen from the table that land in Europe was the most degraded of all nations surveyed while North America turned out to confront the matter least. Meanwhile, over-gazing appeared to be the major cause for this degradation throughout the world.
A more detailed look at the figures reveals that while the proportion of deforestation for Europe seemed to overtake the remainders (at 9.8%), that of North America stayed insignificantly at 0.2%. In terms of over-cultivation, once again the rate at 7.7% made Europe take the lead compared to 0% in Oceania. In contrast, when it comes to over-grazing, the highest percentage of 11.3% was seen to be Oceania while that of North America only accounted for the smallest 1.5%. Furthermore, it was widely perceived that 35% of land degradation was blame to over-gazing. Clearly, over-cultivation and deforestation made up for 30% and 28% respectively.
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