• Chữa bài IELTS Task 1

    • hieutrantrong2411

      Participant
      September 13, 2019 at 1:23 pm

      You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
      The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton.
      Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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      The chart compares the proportion of visitors who went to four different destinations in Brighton within a period of 30 years from 1980 to 2010.

      Overall, there was an increase in the proportion of visitors to Pier and Pavilion, while the figures for Art Gallery nad Festival witnessed a fall during the period shown.

      In the year 1980, the percentage of holidaymakers to Festival was the highest, at roughly 30%. Conversely, Pier was the destination which accounted for the lowest proportion of tourists with exactly 10%. The figure for Pavilion was slightly higher in comparison to Art Gallery, at around 24% and 21% respectively.

      During the period between 1980 and 2004, the percentage of holidaymakers to Art Gallery decreased significantly after peaking at about 38% in 1985, final reaching the figure of 8% at the end of the period. The figure for Pier overtook Art Gallery in 2005, and this ended at just above 20%. The proportion of visitors to Pavilion hit the highest point of nearly 48% in 1995, but then sharply reduced to reach the final figure of just over 30% in 2010, compared to about 28% of Festival.

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      You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
      The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton.
      Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
      .

      The chart compares the proportion of visitors who went to four different destinations in Brighton within a period of 30 years from 1980 to 2010.

      Overall, there was an increase in the proportion of visitors to Pier and Pavilion, while the figures for Art Gallery nad Festival witnessed a fall during the period shown.

      In the year 1980, the percentage of holidaymakers to Festival was the highest, at roughly 30%. Conversely, Pier was the destination which accounted for the lowest proportion of tourists with exactly 10%. The figure for Pavilion was slightly higher in comparison to Art Gallery, at around 24% and 21% respectively.

      During the period between 1980 and 2004, the percentage of holidaymakers to Art Gallery decreased significantly after peaking at about 38% in 1985, final reaching the figure of 8% at the end of the period. The figure for Pier overtook Art Gallery in 2005, and this ended at just above 20%. The proportion of visitors to Pavilion hit the highest point of nearly 48% in 1995, but then sharply reduced to reach the final figure of just over 30% in 2010, compared to about 28% of Festival.

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    • ntiendat.ict

      Participant
      September 14, 2019 at 12:04 pm

      Bạn có thể nâng band điểm lên bằng cách chủ động so sánh các số liệu với nhau và dùng nhiều ngôn ngữ so sánh hơn nữa như twice as much, doudble, almost, approximately…

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