[cuong284]

Dear Jon,
I hope your’re doing well. I’m very disappointed as not able to go over your home last month. I’m really busy for moving to a new house to get closer to my office.
It takes around 10 minutes to get to my company by walk and that saves me about an hour a day, so I can reserve more time for my children. Moreover, my new house is located in a modern area of the city and benefit a lot of good facilities like shopping mall, theatre, parks and etc. The new house is a little smaller than the old one but thank to the big garden, it is spacious. I’d like to invite you come over to have the BBQ party with my family in this weekend. I’m going to invite some our classmates and my new neighbors. They’re really nice and supportive. You’ll love them then. Let me know if you can arrange and enjoy with us.
See you

[khanhlinhphan357]

Hi bạn
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Chúc bạn học tốt!

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