[Dung]

The pie charts compate amounts of carbonhydrates, protein and fat in 3 different kinds of diets, namely average diet, healthy diet and healthy diet for sport.
Overall, balanced diets contain less protein and more carbohydrates than average ones. In addition, fat accounts for the smallest amount in healthy diet for sport, while the figures in the 2 remaining types are equal.
In an average diet, 40% of nutrients are carbohydrates, while this proportions in healthy diet and healthy diet for sport are 50% and 60%, respectively. Another 40% of nutrients in an average diet are protein, compared with 30% and 25% in healthy diet and healthy diet for sport, in turn.
Fat explains for the smallest amount in healthy diet for sport, at only 15%, equivalent to one fourth of the amount of carbohydrate and nearly half of protein. In comparison, 20% of nutrients in average and healthy diet are fat, 5% less than healthy meal for sport.

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Dear Dung,
Please kindly check! :)

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Dear Dung,
Please kindly check! :)

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[Dung]

Bạn ơi chỗ này : while this proportions in healthy diet and healthy diet for sport are 50% and 60%, respectively.” dùng số nhiều là đúng rồi chứ, tỉ lệ cho healthy diet and healthy diet for sport là 2 cái tỉ lệ mà?

[truongminhtri210595]

Dear Dung,
Theo nội dung bạn vừa trình bày, bạn vui lòng chỉnh lại phần chủ ngữ thành these proportions để match với phần số nhiều phía sau bạn vừa mô tả nha :)

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