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The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year

The circle graphs provides information about the average amount of money Japanese and Malaysian regulated on household goods in the provided year.

Overall, what stands out from the paragraph is that Malaysian tended to pay most for Housing, while Japanese opted for other goods and services. Moreover, the least expenditures in both Japan and Malaysia were for Health care.

Looking at the graphs in more detail, money spent on Food in Japan, which was the second-ranked, was much more than that in Transport and Health care. Furthermore, Japanese expenditures on Transport doubled that in Malaysia. The same tendency applied to Health care in both countries.

It is also observable that figures for Housing in Malaysia were almost twice as much as that in Japan. Similarly, the amount of money spent on Food in Malaysia was a bit higher than that in Japan.

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