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01 Dollar IELTS Writing Correction Service – Submit your Writing here
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01 Dollar IELTS Writing Correction Service – Submit your Writing here

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March 18, 2020 at 9:00 pm
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Hi bạn,
Bài của bạn khá ổn hơn bài trước. Tuy nhiên vẫn có lỗi sai dữ liệu và dùng danh từ còn bị chung hóa, từ vựng chưa được đa dạng và có khả năng paraphrase. Bạn xem nhận xét của mình có gì thắc mắc thì hỏi nhé!
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