• Chữa bài IELTS Task 1

    • Trân

      Participant
      August 7, 2017 at 4:10 pm

      TASK 1
      The chart below shows the proportions of adults in Canada who own one car, two cars, more than two cars, or who do not own a car.
      Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

      The pie chart give information about the percentage of Canadian who use one car, more than a cars for the transportation or who do not have a car
      Overall, people who own a car made up the highest rate in all of the chart. In particular, the space of adults having more than two cars in comparison with the proportion of 3 other parts is significant.
      It is clear that most of individuals even contain a car for transferring about over a half of pie chart (approximately 65 percent). The space covered by green shows on the rate of people owning two cars about 25 percent. In addition, the still part less than a quarter of chart which included persons without car and more than two cars is about 16% and 4% respectively.

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    • haduyduywru

      Participant
      August 10, 2017 at 6:24 am

      This is your corrected essay. Do not hesitate to ask me if you have any questions.

      Thank you!

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