• Chữa bài IELTS Task 1

    • hnmai1237

      Participant
      September 22, 2017 at 9:19 pm

      Participation in cultural activities, by age

      16-24
      25-44
      45-74
      All aged 16 and over

      %
      %
      %
      %
      Any performance*
      35
      22
      17
      22
      Undertaking any crafts
      11
      17
      22
      19
      Cultural purchases
      11
      17
      18
      16
      Any visual arts
      30
      16
      11
      15
      Any writing
      17
      6
      5
      7
      Computer based
      10
      9
      5
      6
      * Dancing, singing, playing musical instruments and acting

      The table compares the proportion of cultural activities’ participants aging from 16 to 74 in terms of 6 activities including crafts, cultural purchases, visual art, writing, computer based and any performance.
      Overall, it can be seen from the table that people in the 16-24 age group accounts for most of these activities. It is also noticeable that computer based activity is the one that less joined by all 3 age groups. According to the table, group aged 16 to 24 tends to enjoy visual art than any other age group, respectively 30% and 35%, double those of the oldest group which only takes the percentage of 22% and 15% respectively. By contrast, the group of people aged 45 to 74 took part in crafts and cultural purchases excess those of 16-24 group by 11% and those of 25-44 group about 1-5%.
      It is also worth mentioning that only 5% of the oldest people participate in writing and computer activities, while those of 16-24 group are the highest, which are over 10% but below 17%. That leads to the lowest percentage of writing and computer based activities’ participants in all aged 16 and over groups, while the highest ones belong to crafts and other activities.

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    • anna229112

      Blocked
      September 24, 2017 at 8:48 pm

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    • ivynguyen

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      September 25, 2017 at 11:05 am

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