Chữa bài IELTS Task 1
The table compares the percentage of the mobile phone market share for many well-known producers in the world in two consecutive years, 2005 and 2006.
Overall, there was a change in the proportion of the market share over two studied years. While the figures for most companies fell, that for Nokia, Motorola and Sony Ericsson rose.
As can be seen, Nokia was a leading mobile phone manufacturer among the studied manufactures between 2005 and 2006. It’s market share accounted for 32.5% in 2005, which was nearly twice as high as that of the second leading company, Motorola, at 17.7% in this year. The figures for Nokia and Motorola increase significantly in 2006, at 35% and 21.1% respectively. The following competitor, Sony Ericson saw a large increase from 6.3% in 2005 to 7.4% in 2006.
In contrast, the market share of Samsung decreased by almost 1% to 11.8% in 2006. Likewise, the sales of the L.G and other companies fell from 6.7% and 19.2% in 2005 to 6.3 and 16.2% in 2006 respectively. The global market share of BenQ Mobile dropped to 2.4% in 2006, a reduction of 2.5% compared with the previous year.Attachments:
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