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Hi Phương Nhìn chung thì bài của bạn khá ổn. Tuy nhiên bài hơi dài so với writing task1, trong phòng thi bạn sẽ không có đủ thời gian để viết được từng này chữ và cũng không cần thiết. Về phần diễn đạt đôi chỗ hơi khó hiểu, bạn xem lại giúp mình nhé! Chúc bạn học tốt.

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01 Dollar IELTS Writing Correction Service – Submit your Writing here
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01 Dollar IELTS Writing Correction Service – Submit your Writing here

dongphuong02011
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February 28, 2020 at 8:10 pm
[2/28/2020, 8:14:49 PM] Cám ơn các bạn!
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March 8, 2020 at 6:53 pm
Hi Phương
Nhìn chung thì bài của bạn khá ổn. Tuy nhiên bài hơi dài so với writing task1, trong phòng thi bạn sẽ không có đủ thời gian để viết được từng này chữ và cũng không cần thiết. Về phần diễn đạt đôi chỗ hơi khó hiểu, bạn xem lại giúp mình nhé!
Chúc bạn học tốt.
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