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Some people think that the teenage ages the happiest times of most people’lives .Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.Discuss both views and give your own opinion
In some people’s childhood dream, the wish to be adult may be the biggest wish.Perhaps, they think that, the more mature they are, the more interesting things the life will bring them, despite greater duties. However, there are contrary points of view that throughout the lifetime the most delighted time is the teenage age. While adulthood has its own significances, I would argue that adolescent life is the most unforgettable time.
On the one hand, adulthood brings joy based on some financial and experiental reasons. There are some small but miracle things that we are only able to take pleasures in when we are adults. The bliss a father feels when he hears his first child calling him “papa” is incomprehensible to a teenage.Also, the feeling of being independent and having economic freedom to enjoy luxury holidays is just a thirst for the young.Yet,once becoming ripened means people have to be under a lot of work pressures.In addition, they may have problems in physical conditions and have to face up to harsh reality of life.
On the other hand, I believe that youth has its own values.Teen ages are the ages of dream, freedom and recklesness. They have not been bound by responsibilities.The complexities of life rarely touch them.Besides, they are always in good health condition. Therefore, they can do whatever they want, whenever they like.In their’s eyes everything is new and worthy to be explored.Since they are open minded they are not afraid to be challenged so they always have chance to own unforgetful moments.
In conclusion, while adulthood bring us its own connotations, it seems to me that making your youth memorable is necessary .It is hoped that children will be probably encouraged by their parents to have a great time in their childhood.

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