• Chữa Writing 911

    ivynguyen updated 7 years, 11 months ago 3 Members · 3 Posts
    • phuong

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      August 14, 2017 at 3:24 pm

      The Internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the Internet and what solutions can you suggest ?
      The advent of the Internet has brought incredible changes to human life, especially on the way we consume and share information. However, it has also caused problems which have never appeared before relating to both our physical and mental development. There are several solutions to change these negative impacts nonetheless.
      There are basically two serious problems caused by the overuse of the Internet.The first issue is about physical health.That some people are too dependent on the Internet makes them more and more passive.They do almost everything with a smart phone with access to the Internet.As a result, they can not tear themselves from it and they move less. They just keep sitting there and staring at their phones.Therefore, Internet overuse can lead to sedentary lifestyles, weight gain and a decline in physical fitness.The second issue relates to mental health. The virtual world that the Internet builds up makes Internet users forget where they really belong to and disconnect them from the beloved people around us. As a consequence, the more they use the Internet , the more lonely they feel.It would be no exaggeration to say that misusing the Internet may also be slowly driving Internet users to the brink of insanity.
      Consequently, measures must be taken by each individual to keep the Internet useful instead of harmful. It is advisable that Internet users keep smart phones having Internet connection out of their reach, use them only when absolutely necessary.As a consequent, people may have more time to engage in outdoor activities, doing exercises to enhance health.In addition, putting the phones down helps people care more about their family and friends by opening heart to them.Moreover, society and schools play an important role in educating teenagers how to use the Internet sensibly.For instance, in the U.S, some coffee shops have forbidden the use of Internet to encourage communication.
      In conclusion, only by having the right perception of the effect of misusing the Internet, will we avoid running into problems caused by it.

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    • anna229112

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      August 17, 2017 at 10:01 am

      [09:58:57, 17/8/2017] Cám ơn các bạn!

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    • ivynguyen

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      August 17, 2017 at 11:20 am

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