Chữa bài IELTS Task 2
Some people enjoy change, and they look forward to new experiences. Others like their lives to stay the same, and they do not change their usual habits. Discuss both views. Which one you prefer? Explain why?
In the modern society, daily life is considered as one of the primary concerns in human’s life. In connection to this, some people hold the view that change leads to new happening and exciting, whereas the others suggest that people don’t want to change by keeping their routines. In my written essay, I will clearly discuss the two opposing views on the given statement as well as present my own opinion with detailed information and evidences.
On the one hand, numerous advantages are very evident on the given topic. The first point is about the opportunities brought by changing. Change helps people learning new things and receiving good result due to wide range of knowledge. As a result, new opportunities may come. For example, when applying for a new job, people have chance to build new relationship, get higher salary and study new skills. In addition, another point to consider is about dynamic life. They spend most of their time learning new aspects, travelling to other areas, meeting new friends. Therefore, their lives are kept busy without being bored. However, there are some drawbacks of change can be brought into discussion. Firstly, people may get high risk in case of change. People can’t foresee all possible consequences may come unexpectedly. For example, when doctor applies new method of treatment, he may not succeed and it impact negatively to patient’s health. One more example is a business man invests most of his money to operate a new company but it’s bankrupt after a short time of operation.
On another hand, there are also both up and down sides of keeping the usual habits. The first advantage is about the stable life. People don’t want to change can maintain what they have had and don’t have to worry about new risk. For example, working in the same position in one company helps people to get a fixed amount of salary. Moreover, another advantage is that people will gain more experience and get less mistakes by doing the same thing daily. As a result, they can save much time fixing issues and have a better outcome. In contrast, people don’t like change have a simple and boring life. Keeping their lives stay the same causes passive behavior.
In conclusion, despites of some up sides of staying at the same life without change I prefer having an active life and new experiment.Attachments:
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