Chữa bài IELTS Task 2
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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, comparedwith the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.There has recently been a tendency that the population of some countries is becoming comparatively younger than ever. Many believe that this will bring about a great deal of benefits whereas others claim that the trend might run many complicated risks. From my perspective, I am in favor of the former for a number of specific reasons.
On the one hand, more youngsters would fairly mean more troubles in terms of entertainment investment or increasing social evils. Supporters for this inclination states that young demand quite a lot which may cause countries to waste a considerable budget on building playgrounds, clubs and leisure centers. Also, it can be relatively uneasy for the youth to stay away negative harmful joys like doing drugs and theft. For example, as a matter of fact, number of the elders caught in such evils are convinced to be much lesser than the curious teenagers.
Conversely, I would argue that the advantages gained from a young population win its trivial drawbacks. One of the main reasons for this claim is that young people will make a significant major contribution to provide a strong labor force. Evidently, old workers are considered weaker and less potential than such growing adults who are the most suited for working as they possess bright minds and boundless energy. Also, the problem of unemployment, in other words, can be solved a great deal. Another reason advocating for my idea is that large number of elderly people might create an extreme financial burden on the authorities. An example of this would be the investment in medication care or nursing homes.
All things considered, while the increase in youngsters may lead to serious social matters, it is an undeniable fact that their presence is quite essential for a developing country.
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