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Leisure s a growing industry , but people no longer entertain themselves as
much as they used to because the use of modern technology has made them
less creative .What is your opinion

In recent decades,leisure has been receiving a great deal of public
attention and is becoming endless controversy around the world.Athough some
people advocated that entertainment is superseded by technology which is
appear to made people less inventive,I totally disagree with this argument

It is clear that technology seems to be an efficient way gives relaxation
and recreation to people particularly after overload working hours.First
and foremost ,advances in technology bring us full of energetic and
exuberant of entertainment such as games or downloading podcast.For example
, people is likely to spend all days on smart-phone with either some online
games such as PS –a most attractive game nowdays or surf facebooks-a social
networks even if silver surfer who seems to become absolete,which help
people more relaxing .Secondly,population explosion is growing due to
reduce the land of amusement park;it is easy to understand that technology
is in vague for some times.By park narrow down more and more ,people have
to accept the overcrowed states in park so instead of play active games in
this ground ,they choose the way to entain through technology –an efficient
way to leisure.

There is no denying the fact that technology act as incentive for people
more creative.Digital revolution bring us broaden knowledge in some field
what people are difficult to approach. If a student have passion about
techonological breakthrough ,he totally come up with lots of helpful
information through online computer,which help he are conductive to
accelerate knowledge or even generating some surprised
inventions.Technology not only help people in the lives but also motivate
human kind to more creative.By the helpful technology such as driverless
vehicles from robotics,people can see themselves having more time to enjoy
their life,there appear to stimulate them to create leading –edge
technology which require lots of creative.

In conclusion , technology not only ensures our leisure but aslo acts as an
incentive for us more creative.Government need to invest to technology to
takes steps developing countries.

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