• Chữa Writing 911

    ivynguyen updated 7 years, 11 months ago 3 Members · 3 Posts
    • Hungctdq12

      Participant
      August 11, 2017 at 8:45 pm

      Several years ago,people usually spent their lifetime in one day. However our lifestyle have change thank to development of technology and modern transportation.Nowadays we move around and live in many different places. There are some benefit and disadvantage of both
      I firmly believe that living in one place since born until die have its advantage. They knew each other well so they could support when they had problem. Family and friends were close.In small communication, they hardly argue or be under pressure in human life.For example today,they cant adopt the polluted environment around them. It will make children have difficulty because have to change their school many times. The more places they move,the more they lose meet with family and even hard to make new friends
      On the other hand,moving around has its benefits. First of all,they help you gain new experience and knowledge. They can meet new people and new friends, extend their interest. Different from the past,its easy for who want a good career. They could widen their relationship for business,…because they couldnt find one around them in many years ago. It was complicate to have comfortable life without a good job
      In conclusion, everyone is always looking for the best place to stay. My opinion is moving around to develop my life ,try new experience to become successful.

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    • anna229112

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      August 13, 2017 at 7:14 pm

      [19:12:31, 13/8/2017] Cám ơn các bạn!

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    • ivynguyen

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      August 14, 2017 at 9:38 am

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