• Chữa Writing 911

    ivynguyen updated 7 years, 11 months ago 3 Members · 3 Posts
    • Nguyễn Thị Diễm Quỳnh

      Participant
      August 18, 2017 at 11:06 pm

      Essay topics: Advertising is all around us, it is an unavoidable part of everyone’s life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives while others say it is a negative one. Discuss both views and include your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.
      Due to the advancements of our life’s attribute, advertising plays an irreplaceable part in our today society. It is commonly believed that positive effects are brought by advertising, while the opponents of this idea prefer to negative ones. While there are some disadvantages in advertise product, I would argue that this type of marketing offers a lot of benefits
      On one hand, Advertisements may be indesirable for several reasons. First. many companies can manipulate customer through advertising. They aim to persuade people that buying this product will make them happier. Apart from that, they focus on selling a brand image widely by using glamorous, stardom people who have major influences on people namely singers, models or professions. Second, we are now live in a consumer culture where we are convinced to get the latest trend. Moreover, these companies encourage us to associate certain brands with higher status so that we are willing to purchase products which are considered to be up-to-date at this mommen. In addition, Advertisers often aim their marketing at children who can easily influence and then put pressure on parents to buy them things.
      On the other hand, it seems to me that there is a variety of advantages why advertising is invariably crucial in selling products. The first reason is advertising is a key to economic prosperity. Without advertising, food producers, mining operators or business can not succeed because they need to tell the customer about their new products and inform the choices we have. For examples, customers can compare logically between different products to find the optimal decision. The second one is that higher unemployment will have increased without advertising. It is a creative industry that employs many people especially in developing country where unemployment still an urgent problem with far-reaching effects.
      In conclusion, it seems evident that advertising has both advantages and drawbacks. However, it is also indispensable in free market economies so governments should only censor false information or products that are harmful

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    • anna229112

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      August 22, 2017 at 1:44 am

      [01:44:35, 22/8/2017] Cám ơn các bạn!

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    • ivynguyen

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      August 22, 2017 at 9:51 am

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