Chữa bài IELTS Task 2
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The animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on land and in sea. What are the reasons and solutions?
The extinction of many terrestrial animals and marine creatures is attributed to activities of human. This belief stems from deforestation an industrialization, which can be addressed by stricter punishment and the advancement of technology to treat waste.
There are many reasons why human activities are blamed for the risk of many endangered animals. On land, the deforestation is on the rise to make room for more living space. Additionally, temperature rising because of the emission of CO2 from factories or daily activities is also the principal culprit of forest fires. For those reasons, many animals whose habitat is forest are put on the brink of extinction due to habitat destruction. With marine ecosystem, toxic sewage is dumped from manufacturing plants or households into the sea, so water degradation is inevitable. Formosa – a steel producing company – released liquid waste into the sea in the center of Vietnam last year, killing thousands of tonnes of fishes.
Some effective measures need to be taken to increase animal preservation. Firstly, government can implement more severe punishment for any activities threatening the green lung of our planet, which is home for many animals on land. If heavy fine or even prison sentence is applied for devastating behaviors such as cutting down trees or deforesting, the life of endangered animals dwelling there will be conserved. Secondly, we should invest more money in inventing and upgrading pollution treatment system to clean sewage before dumping it into rivers or oceans. For example, household sewage need to be purified to eradicate oil or poisons which may contaminate a part of ocean by a cutting-edge machine before being discharged to protect marine ecosystem.
In conclusion, the danger of wildlife on land or in the sea stems from irresponsible activities of people, and several measures need to be done to mitigate its cumulative effects.Kindly check!
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