• Chữa bài IELTS Task 2

    • Minh Ngọc

      Participant
      December 7, 2017 at 10:02 pm

      Modern lifestyles mean that many parents have little time for their children. Many children suffer because they do not get as much as attention from parents as children did in the past. Do you agree or disagree ?
      In developed world, people are always busy to keep up with the worldwide trend, so that many parents have less time with their children. It leads to many consequences which effect on kids. I totally agree with this statement.
      On the one hand, most parents are occupied with their work in modern life. With the advancement in technology, people can easily keep in touch with their colleagues and get the latest news of their business even they are at home or on the holidays. Unlike in the past, when people were at home, they completely had time with their family and were not concerned about their work.. Modern parents think that they are doing their best for their children. They work hard not only meet both ends meet bus can also afford for their kids the best things in the world like expensive clothes and food.
      On the other hand, these arguments mentioned above case many negative long-term effects on their children. First of all, what parents do just brings for their kids happiness from the aspect of facilities, not spirit. Therefore, child can envy of others who are happy with their family which lead to the depression or they may have wrong behaviors. Vietnam in the past, for example, although parents had to work all day but they always spent their time with their children to play and talk with them.
      In conclusion, work is very important with parents in order to earn livings; however, it seems to me that they should spend more their time with their children

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    • Thùy Trang

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      December 8, 2017 at 9:09 pm

      [21:09:42, 8/12/2017] Cám ơn các bạn!

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