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Question: More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in a foreign country. Many people think this development is really positive . Do you agree or disagree?

The past few years, youngster especialy is students are choosing to live and learnt at international school, becoming trend. It is thought that development is extremly positve . In my oppinion, i partly agree.
There are many benefit of studing abroad. Firstly, student studying in educational system include international prestiguos university and modern schooling curriculum with the engagement of experienced educators. Secondly, have a chance to explore new cultures. For example, not only could abroad student in Japan experience local cuisines such as shushi, … but also gaze with cherry blossom which is one of Japan’s symbol. Finally, When you study in foreign countries there are a lot of opportunities to travel in the city, out of city or travel to other countries, while completing the assignments and other projects. Traveling opportunity give the freshman to the student mind, which is very helpful in studies.
Apart from advantages, there are two challanges for international students. One difficult is that langguage barrier when you talk to native speaker but don’t understand together such as buy somthing or use slang, idioms… Another disavantage of international student is living far from family and friend can’t avoid lonelinness, homesickless cause lossing concentration on studying.
To sum up, learning at another country is both advantageous and đíavantageuos. Students should be prompt if you choose study overseas.

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