It is more important to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on treatment of people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree of disagree? Attachments:You must be logged in to view attached files.

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February 17, 2020 at 5:06 pm
It is more important to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on treatment of people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree of disagree?
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Nhìn chung bài của bạn vấn đề lớn nhất là mạch lạc và cách diễn đạt cũng như thống nhất idea. Bạn xem các nhận xét của mình nha.
Mong bạn khắc phục được lỗi trong các bài viết sau.
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