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Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ?
It is true that in recent years celebrities have been becoming more famous for their charm and assests than for their goals. While I agree some individuals set a bad example to teenagers, I believe that other celebrities are a good source of inspiration and motivation.
On the one hand, there are some evidences why teenagers should not follow many famous people. Firstly, some celebrities have a tendency to use money from their parents ; therefore, it is difficult to them to control their budgets effectively. Secondly, instead of working hard to move up the career ladder, the do a multitude of advertisements with exorbitant things or make a travelling to oversea. For instance, celebrities endorsement by famous TV stars is commonly used by companies to encourage consumer to buy products ; and teenagers would like to buy this manufactures to act as their idols. Finally , if celebrities do som bad action in their lives, such as using drugs and motor racing, they are able to create opportunity for young children to embark on a life of crime.
On the other hand, some celebrities are excellent, and we could learn from them a number of good things. Actors , actrees and footballers have to develop their skills from day to day, and live in difficult situations until they become star. As a result, they inspire some teenagers to participate in some challenges to become the winner. In addition, these people also do some volunteer work, and give a donation to some rural area to help the local people. Thanks to this, we all be happy to receive an emotional support, and we therefore have a better social in the near future.
In conclusion, while I accept that some bad people become celebrities in wrong way, I do believe many famous people could teach young childrren with good lessons.Attachments:
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