Chữa bài IELTS Task 2
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More and more people are migratin to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone ?
It is true that nowadays individuals tend to move to cities for living, however there are some disadvantages of living in a metropolis. In my opinion, it is necessary that governments could do some measures to address these problem.
To begin with, living in an urban could be difficult to some people for several reasons. Firstly, the cost expenses in city is extremely higher than surburb area; therefore, citizens have to spend a multitude of their budget on services and transports. For example, people living in Ha Noi have to pay amounts of money to car-park, rent a house and buy vegetables. Secondly, people would live in multicultural societies with casual acquaintances, and they need time to adapt to a new environment. Finally, the air pullution is the main problem in metropolis because there are so many vehicle and factories aroud there. As a consequence, the quality of life would decrease, and affect to their health.
At the same time, there are various steps that national authority could take to tackle this issue. It is significant that government would cut down on emissions from their cars, besides plant an enormous number of trees around the city. As a result, we all be happy when living in a green environment, so the life expectancy would increase. In addition, building an apartment for residents with suitable prices is the best method to reduce the living cost. If citizens have a support from a state organization, such as a loan and administrative procedures, they are ability to reduce some pressure that they have met through their lives.
In conclusion, although some drawbacks still exist in city, however governments could use a wide range of measure to improve the residents’s lives.Attachments:
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