• Chữa Writing 911

    ivynguyen updated 7 years, 11 months ago 3 Members · 3 Posts
    • HA

      Participant
      August 7, 2017 at 6:07 pm

      Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on children.
      Do you agree or disagree?
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      Many people think that there are more disadvantages than advantages for the youngsters to have access to the computer daily. I definitely disagree with this idea as it is of my opinion that computers are very important for children nowadays.
      First of all, technology has provided us a great tool of learning. As a result, the minors can start to use computers at a very small age to study. For example, a toddler can watch youtube to know about animals, flowers, numbers or letters. Moreover, there are a lot of softwares which play a critical role in studying. Students must use Powerpoint to present an idea or Microsoft word to write an essay. This can only be done by giving them access to the computer/
      In addition, in our modern life, using computers with internet access is a powerful way of connecting people. There are thousands of online social groups to share common topics which fit people at certain ages such as the minors, the adults or the elders. Therefore, children should be encouraged to use computers to stay up-to-date with hot news and topics or to be connected with friends and family. For instance, children can talk to their parents via Skype when they are on business trip and computers really help family members to stay closer to each other in our hectic life.
      In conclusion, I think that the usage of computers indisputably has more useful than harmful impacts on the minors. Computers provide children with plenty tools of learning as well as a prefect way of being connected with the outside world.

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    • anna229112

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      August 11, 2017 at 11:25 am

      [11:24:33, 11/8/2017] Cám ơn các bạn!

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    • ivynguyen

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      August 11, 2017 at 5:10 pm

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