[trannguyenanthai96]

Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences.
Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion.

Nowadays, it can be seen that the use of computers are more widespread in many schools. Although some people think this has positive impacts on children, I believe there are some negative consequences coming from this trend.
On the one hand, we cannot deny the crucial need of modern technology in education. In fact, students are permitted to learn how to use computers for educational purposes while they enter schools at early ages. Moreover, it is very convenient if students get approachable to allocate computers since they can look for helpful information which supports their studies. Lastly, it is a fast and easy way for self-studying when pupils want to extend their knowledge. I mean, there are a wide range of lessons designed attractively on the Internet which children can easily find and download to their devices.
On the other hand, relying too much on computers can lead to passive attitudes and addiction among students. Because they are still young, they simply cannot control and recognize the harmful effects of technology. They are willing to spend hours in front of a laptop or computer screen, which causes poor eyesight and other physical pains. Furthermore, in some families, parents are too busy to supervise their kids and let them freely use technological devices without setting a time limit. The most important reason, personally, is sometimes children don’t use computers for the right purposes, it means they can get addicted to games and violent shows which affect their behaviors in reality.
In conclusion, I can understand why people consider the application of computers in education is necessary, but it seems to me that the drawbacks this trend may cause is far outweigh the positive impacts.

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