• Chữa bài IELTS Task 2

    • Ngô Công Bình

      Participant
      June 29, 2018 at 1:45 pm

      [6/29/2018, 1:45:32 PM] Cám ơn các bạn!

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      Some people believe that a crime is a result of social problems and poverty, others think that crime is a result of bad person’s nature. Dicuss both and give your opinion.
      People have different views about the reason that individuals break the law. While there is an argument for innate characteritics, I believe that social proplems are one of the most factors cause crime for the following justifications.
      To begin with, it can be argued that a person’s nature affects people’s behaviour, and cause them to commit a crime. Firstly, some people are curious about new things ; therefore, they might embark on a life of crime. For instance, nowadays numbers of teenagers tend to try unfamilar chemical and biological that bring to them a fantastic feelings. As a consequence, they are addicted, and turn to crime to obtain money to use this. Secondly, instead of studying and working hard in schools and companies, some youngsters would like to earn money easily and quickly, so they are able to become a thief or shoplifters. Finally, if teenagers want to make friend with casual acquaintances, they are ability to engage in criminal activities.
      On the other hand, I believe that most of crime come from social issue and poverty. It is true that some rural areas lack of education and jobs, so usually do the crime rates have a high level. Individuals living here have no choice, and they have to do some illegal acts for their suvival. In addition, it is necessary that national authority should raise awareness of crime prevention in our societies as a method of providing and teaching some law materials. As a result, we all be happy when live in a legal environment.
      In conclusion, although an innate characteritics might be afftected to wrong behaviour, I believe that social problems are important aspect of crime.

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    • ivynguyen

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      July 2, 2018 at 2:52 am

      Dear, we’re so sorry that we do not upload feedback for your written work within 24 hours because of some technical problems. We will send the feedback for your work on Monday-Tuesday, 02-03 July. We will try to tackle this problem and send feedback soon within 24 hours from next week. Thank you for your understanding.

    • haduyduywru

      Participant
      July 3, 2018 at 2:21 pm

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