People are living longer. Some people think that it causes big problems. Others, however, think the aging population has many advantages for business, government and for society in general. Discuss both views and give your opinion? Attachments:You must be logged in to view attached files.

Hi bạn Nhìn chung thì bài của bạn khá ổn. Vốn từ vựng đủ dùng cho bài, tuy nhiên ngữ pháp vẫn mắc một số lỗi sai không đáng có và chưa đa dạng trong các loại câu phức. Cách diễn đạt đôi khi vẫn hơi khó hiểu (như trong kết bài) Bạn cố gắng khắc phục các lỗi trên nha.

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February 17, 2020 at 5:08 pm
People are living longer. Some people think that it causes big problems. Others, however, think the aging population has many advantages for business, government and for society in general. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
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Hi bạn
Nhìn chung thì bài của bạn khá ổn. Vốn từ vựng đủ dùng cho bài, tuy nhiên ngữ pháp vẫn mắc một số lỗi sai không đáng có và chưa đa dạng trong các loại câu phức. Cách diễn đạt đôi khi vẫn hơi khó hiểu (như trong kết bài)
Bạn cố gắng khắc phục các lỗi trên nha.
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