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Đề bài: Some people think that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that is better to get a job straight after school.
Discuss both views.

In recent years, students have one main problem after they finished high school, that is: Should they continue their study at university or college or find a job straight. Both these opinions have a good point, continue studying is a right thing to do, however, getting a job right after school sounds a reasonable think to consider.
For some students, they learn do not as good as other quick learners, so after finishing high school, they begin their own life-work. When they go to work, they can start earning money. Although those works are manual labour works, but they can still earn money for themselves, they do not need to depend on their family and be able to proud of themselves a little bit.Th other benefit students can learn from works is gaining experience. Where they work, especially the work brings them a lot of pressure helps them to accumulate experience in order to become a grown man. Not only that but also they can learn so many skills on their field. For example, they can learn teamwork skill, tricks which helps them improve their ability at work, so that they can complete their job better and increase the chance of having a bonus with their income. If they do well, some people even get a promotion, can afford to buy a house or have a family. Going straight to work is not totally a bad idea for students nowadays if they do not want to continue their study.
In contrast, there are also some people believe that students should go to universities or colleges. This is also an idea that students should consider. Some specific jobs such as doctors, engineers or architects. For some students, they just want to go to university may be they had their own dream since they were childs to became someone who has major is a specific subject.
Futhermore, if students finish their university they will have a better job opportunities, the potential salary level is also higher than salary of students go straight to work. Although job market in recent years is quite competitive and hard but this is still a good choice for most of students.
In conclusion, continuing the study or going straight to work all have advantages. It depends on student’s choice, their hobbies and also their ability on the field.

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