Chữa bài IELTS Task 2
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It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is best both for the individual and for society.
Do you agree or disagree?
Many people believe that marriage should be taken before the age of 30. I totally agree with this statement as I think that early marriage has both personal and social benefits.
Firstly, starting a family life on the edge of turning 30 will help couples to settle down early. As a result, instead of wasting their time on youngster’s activities such as playing video games all day or going to clubs every night, they will focus on working more to earn a better living. In addition, delivering a child between the age of 25 and 30 will prevent both mothers and babies from diseases such as pregnancy diabetes or down syndrome. According to many researches, complications of pregnancy increase when women give birth after the age of 35.
Secondly, delaying marriage will cause a danger to the development of the economy due to reduction in numbers of working labour. In the developed countries, the old population is increasing as people tend to enjoy single life longer without having a baby. For example, the growth rate of Japanese economy is continuously negative because of high proportion of elders in the country. Besides, encouraging people to embark on early marriage and parenthood will help to develop a healthy generation who will play a vital role in the future of the society.
In conclusion, people should be urged to get married before the age of 30 as doing so will bring irrefutable benefits to every single couple and the society as a whole.
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