Chữa bài IELTS Task 2
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Some people think that the main purpose of schools is to teach children to be a good citizen or worker rather than to benefit them as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is widely argued that the prime aim of schools is to show students how to be a good metropolitant or colleague instead of growing them as individuals. This essay completely disagrees with this statement because schools teach children more things than just only being a good person and they also give children the most necessary preparation before coming into society.
Firsly, school has many subjects that is able to instruct children almost every aspects of science-based subjects, or even Art, Music, Literature. Therefore, children have many opportunities to study the one they are interested in, and even improve the knowledge they obtain from other ones. Furthermore, being a good person with well-behaved morality, we only need to be good at Civic Education, but to guarantee a successful career in the future, we also have to learn many different topics provided by teachers. For instance, if a student dreams of becoming an engineer, not only does he focus on mathematics, he should have a chance to develop himself with some other subjects.
Secondly, school stage gives children the best preparation before really becoming a worker. At school, there are lots of friends and activities that students can join freely. By making mistakes and self correcting them, students are able to gain some real experience and motivations not to make such flaws. This can lead to some benefits to a student, training him to be a self-perfection one who is likely to deal with different problems.
In conclusion, I believe that schools have a more important role to play in one’s life rather than teach the students how to be good.here is the correction to your essay. hope it helps you.
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