• Chữa bài IELTS Task 2

    • Phạm Hiệp

      Participant
      September 6, 2019 at 9:05 pm

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      Đề In modern society, many people think primary school should teach science and technology rather than history and geography which are useless and boring. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

      Bài làm
      Type of subjects that children ought to learn has been a profound topic nowadays. There are many supporters of teaching science and technology due to their helpfulness and attraction, rather than history and geography. In my view, students should be taught all of them. This essay aims to elaborate on my opinion.
      On the one hand, science and technology have obvious benefits. Science helps people to increase critical thinking and solving skill. For instance, students will achieve analying skill when trying to overcome a hard mathematics exercise. This skill is not only important for their work in the future but also pretty principal for their life. When it comes to technology, people can not deny its role of economic growth. In the period that mobile phone, computer, fax machine … are greatly widespread, a person who do not have enough knowleage about this field has no chance to compete in job-seeking process. Those are reasons why learners must be taught these two vital subjects.
      On the other hand, there are advantages of history and geography that people can not ignore. In the field of history, students are taught about their cultures and ancestor ‘s lifestyle. Moreover, they know how much hardship that their decendants tried to maintain national freedom and independence. Due to that, they will certainly feel more thankful to those sacrifices and have more motivation to contribute for their countries. Likewhile, geography helps people know more about different cultures and lifestyle around the world. If they are really keen on geography and have a knack for this field, they will be likely to become global citizens in the future thanks to their knowledge.
      In conclusion, all of those subjects are justifiable to be taught in a certain extent. That is the reason why, from my perspective, students ought to learn all of them to improve themselves.

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    • congthanh

      Keymaster
      September 8, 2019 at 7:30 am

      Bài của bạn post lên có 2 bài bị trùng!

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