Chữa bài IELTS Task 2
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Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some believe that extreme sports are a high degree of risk, and national authority should prohibit them . I completely disagree with this statement for the following justifications.
There is a mixed variety of reasons why people argue that extreme sports are very dangerous. Firstly, when individuals participate in this sports, they might face unfamiliar situations that they have never met in their life. For instance, people living in Viet Nam , a tropical country, experience with distinct seasons aroud the year ; therefore, it is difficult and unsafe that they would like to attempt a skiing. Secondly, instead of joining a training courses to prepare skills and take sensible precautions, individuals tend to engage in an extrem sport immediately. Finally, some protective equipments used in sports, such as motor racing and sky diving are so exorbitant, and hardly do they have enough money to buy it.
Despite some negative mentioned above, I believe that the governments should not outlaw these sports. In my opinion, an extreme sports are beneficial for those who want to become the winner, and break the record throughout their lives because they must be in the peak of condition in order to take challenges. They demonstrate great effort, determination and ambition, so the governments should give them an emotional supports like a essential sports gear. As a result, there is a low probability of injury and also the rate of life-threatening injuries will decrease in all participants. Futhermore, if the national authority prohibits dangerous sports, they have ability to make it disappear in the near future.
In conclusion, I accept that some extreme sports are unsafe, however the governments should not inhibit them.We’re truly sorry for sending feedback late as there is an error with some posts on the website, and we cannot upload the corrected file. Fortunately, the error is fixed today. Please kindly check my notes here, and feel free to leave comments if you have any questions. Thanks a lot for your understanding.
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