[Thao Quynh Ho]

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It is true that a moment of luck can, sometimes, bring about unexpected opportunities for people to reach their success. While some may think that luck is the most important factor that contributes to their accomplishments instead of hard-working, I completely disagree with this opinion.
On one hand, successful people are always among the most hard-working ones regardless of their family, academic or personal backgrounds. In fact, people who work with all energy no matter how long it takes till reaching their aims can make difference not only for themselves, but also for their community. The first example is Barack Obama, who have changed his life from a boy growing up in a family with financial difficulties without enough study opportunities compared to his friends, to the first black president of United States of America by devoting his time to non-stop study. The second example is Nick Vujicic, a famous representative, who worked hard to gain degrees and travel around the world to inspire others by his examples, despite the absence of four limbs.
On the other hand, success does not depend on luck. Firstly, students who do nothing but hope to get luck in their exams definitely fail. Secondly, people may be lucky occasionally, but if they rely on a question of luck throughout their lives, they will get disappointed. For instance, Hao Anh is a poor boy who was saved after many years being forced to work exhaustingly by a couple abusing children, after that, he got financial helps from others to go to school for a better future. However, he has completely counted on his luck to get help forever without studying hard, the money now has gone along with his opportunities.
In conclusion, luck plays a tiny part of paving the way for people to reach their aims. Without making every effort, there is no way that people can succeed.

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