Chữa bài IELTS Task 2
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Question: Nowadays leisure industry products and modern gadgets are widely used by young people. The use of these products reduces the young generations creativity. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
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The number of entertainment industry products and modern equipment has been growing and playing a vital role in today’s modern society, especially young people. However, some people point out that the abuse of these products will impair the development of thinking and creativity in the younger generation. From my point of view, I have a bipolar attitudes towards this statement.On the one hand, using too many modern devices will cause many demerits. First, through state-of-the-art support products, they can easily find documents and contents available in almost every field leading to giving birth to lack of necessity for creating new, for example, copying movies script, books, learning materials or scientific ideas. Copy-Pasting will gradually kill and block new thinking and imagination. Moreover, the excessive use of such equipment will not only bring mental and physical stress and fatigue, but also waste a lot of time. The adolescents will spend most of their free time using social networking sites to live in their own virtual worlds and often have serious problems forming social relationships. They cannot imagine how they exist without those up to date equipments and will be subjected to massive assaults if they had no access to their machines.
On the other hand, new devices and modern tools are leverage to help youngsters experience an unrealistic world without any boundaries and boundaries as well as unleash their abilities in various aspects. For example, they can take full advantage of the benefits that the internet brings to expand knowledge about the world like Facebook, Youtube, Instagram, Skype, Twitter and so on. In addition, they can develop new ideas and ways in order to bring out more innovative inventions thank to smart gadgets of technology that are easily accessible to people. Furthermore, some recent studies have shown that playing casual games will stimulate the imagination of young people.
In the nutshell, using modern gizmos will have positive and negative impacts on the creativity of young generations. I surely believe that the effect of leisure industry devices on young people depends on their appropriate purpose and reasonable usage time.
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Question: Nowadays leisure industry products and modern gadgets are widely used by young people. The use of these products reduces the young generations creativity. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
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The number of entertainment industry products and modern equipment has been growing and playing a vital role in today’s modern society, especially young people. However, some people point out that the abuse of these products will impair the development of thinking and creativity in the younger generation. From my point of view, I have a bipolar attitudes towards this statement.On the one hand, using too many modern devices will cause many demerits. First, through state-of-the-art support products, they can easily find documents and contents available in almost every field leading to giving birth to lack of necessity for creating new, for example, copying movies script, books, learning materials or scientific ideas. Copy-Pasting will gradually kill and block new thinking and imagination. Moreover, the excessive use of such equipment will not only bring mental and physical stress and fatigue, but also waste a lot of time. The adolescents will spend most of their free time using social networking sites to live in their own virtual worlds and often have serious problems forming social relationships. They cannot imagine how they exist without those up to date equipments and will be subjected to massive assaults if they had no access to their machines.
On the other hand, new devices and modern tools are leverage to help youngsters experience an unrealistic world without any boundaries and boundaries as well as unleash their abilities in various aspects. For example, they can take full advantage of the benefits that the internet brings to expand knowledge about the world like Facebook, Youtube, Instagram, Skype, Twitter and so on. In addition, they can develop new ideas and ways in order to bring out more innovative inventions thank to smart gadgets of technology that are easily accessible to people. Furthermore, some recent studies have shown that playing casual games will stimulate the imagination of young people.
In the nutshell, using modern gizmos will have positive and negative impacts on the creativity of young generations. I surely believe that the effect of leisure industry devices on young people depends on their appropriate purpose and reasonable usage time.
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