• Chữa bài IELTS Task 2

    • Ngô Công Bình

      Participant
      July 6, 2018 at 11:07 pm

      [7/6/2018, 11:07:15 PM] Cám ơn các bạn!

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      In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development ?

      It is true that some individuals have a tendancy to live alone in recent years. In my opinion, this trend could have both advantages and disadvantages for the following justifications.
      To begin with, there is a mixed variety of reasons why individuals would like to live independently. Firstly, it is significant that people have better feelings in their lives. To be more specific, instead of planning a timetable for theirselves, people living with parents or friends have to follow others’s time; therefore, they would be difficult to do their hobbies and some recreational activities. Secondly, having to live alone is able to help them to control their budgets effective early, such as paying bills, renting an apartment and other living expenses. Finally, living alone is beneficial for those who have a plan for studying oversea because they might face some difficult situations early in society.
      On the other hand, some negative factoer are tookplace for them in life. Hardly do these individuals make a conversation with their families, so they might not receiver an emotinal support. As a result, the quality of life are affected, which mean their studies or works would not be enough a good performance. In addition, if they live without relationships around, they have ability to face some strangers, such as a murderer or a thief. Because of this situations, they might put themselves into the dangerous environments.
      In conclusion, while I accept that several benefits are brought to people’s independent living, some drawbacks still exist in their lives.

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    • ivynguyen

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      July 9, 2018 at 6:15 pm

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