[levienlanhuong]

Question in 11/10/2014:
Today more and more people are using mobile phones and computers. Thus, people are losing the ability to communicate face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

ANSWER
It is argued that although mobile phones and computers play an important role in the modern society today, they prevent people from the face-to-face communication. I completely agree with this idea.
There are a variety of reasons why people have tendency to use high-tech devices in their daily life. Firstly, mobile phones and computers make people easy to keep in touch with each other. People around the world, especially who live far away from their homes, can communicate quickly and conveniently without paying a great sum of money as it used to be through lots of applications on the devices like Facebook or Zalo. Secondly, school leavers or unemployment people may have a great chance to find a job. They may approach hundreds of online recruitment advertisements every day, which give them opportunities to get a suitable job.
At the same time, high-tech devices might keep the users to minimize their face-to-face conversation in real life. In fact, a large number of people seem to disregard to build a relationship with their families and true friends since they spend much time on keeping their eyes glued to screens. They are busy with smartphones to take photos, check in or comment on Facebook and ignore everybody around them. They may prefer sharing their feelings with virtual friends to their family members or true peers. In addition, if users usually interact via mobile phones or computers, they are likely to decrease some communication skills such as eye contacts or body language expressions.
In conclusion, I think in spite of an indispensable role in the modern life, mobile phones as well as computers also have negative impact on direct interaction.

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