[tuananhphan1201]

People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons.
Why do you think people attend colleges or universities?
Should everyone attend college?

Taking a course in universities or colleges has now become popular among young people. Students can learn many new things and well prepare for their future after graduating from there. However, I personally do not think that studying at a college is suitable for everyone.
Attending college helps students enlarge their knowledge and experience as well as prepare for the future. After choosing a major in university, students will be guided to research deeply into it so that they can learn lots of things that they have never been taught in high schools. Moreover, by a variety of social activities organised in universities, learners are able to experience new things which help them to be more confident and mature. Also, by studying in the schools, they have taken the wise step to prepare for their career. For instance, many positions in companies and organisations which are well paid and have good working condition require a Bachelor or higher certificate.
However, university is not always the best choice for everyone. Firstly, the knowledge in classes is very specialized. It requires the ability to learn quick and good research skill that many students do not have. Secondly, in the job market, there are still a lot of professions that the employee may not be good at academic knowledge. Insteed, they must be able to singing, dancing, acting or playing sports really well. Therefore, some students who do not get flying color at school but their talents are showed still can have a good future without attending colleges.
In conclusion, young people attend universities because of its various benefit for their lives. However, studying at these schools is not the only way to be successful for some others.

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[anna229112]

Dear learner,
You have been making remarkable efforts! Nevertheless, it is advisable that you try to be flexible in terms of sentence structures and vocabulary. You can start by using simple grammar properly then gradually try more complex structures. Moreover, try to use academic vocabulary (cohesive devices).
Thank you for supporting IELTS Planet
Kind regards,
CTV Anna Nguyen.
IELTS Planet

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