• Chữa Writing 911

    ivynguyen updated 7 years, 11 months ago 3 Members · 3 Posts
    • Trần Quốc Sơn

      Participant
      August 14, 2017 at 1:28 pm

      Topic: Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
      This is my answer:
      Although many believe father and mother take on main responsibility for educating their children to become a well-behaved person outside whereas others said that it is better than if offspring could learn them from the teacher.
      In my opinion, I agree that bringing up the children to be kind members of the community is the parents’ obligation.
      One of the main reasons why parents responsibility is important is because children spend most of the time in all day at home, therefore parents may make it easy to approach them and teach them how to be considerate human of the community. For instance, parents are the primary people who give a bit suitable advice for their problems. Children can believe absolutely about their parents’ command. In contrast, without parents’ education, many children could make the illegal act.
      I would like to point out that the teacher has more the true responsibility nowadays, but it can not compare clearly with the nurtural ability of parents. At school, children can be learned about academic subjects or outdoor activities. These may help them to improve their knowledge and relationship with friends and teachers. However, how to learn to survive, talk, distinguish well from bad, protect or take care of themselves, it is necessary to need experiences from parents. Most of the parents can spend much time for sharing and educating resiliently children without complaint.
      Besides the important obligation of parents, it is more meaningful if the children can be taught to be a well-behaved in society with teacher`s assistance. This cooperation would lead into a good condition for the children development.
      Thanks, all.

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    • mainganha310

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      August 16, 2017 at 2:07 am

      [8/16/2017, 2:07:17 AM] Cám ơn các bạn!

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    • ivynguyen

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      August 17, 2017 at 9:30 am

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