[Hien Nguyen Thi Thu]

Some people think that good health is a basic human need and the medical
service should not be run by profit-making companies. Do disadvantages
outweigh advantages? Give your opinion.
It is true that nowadays there is an increasing number of privately-
operated healthcare services besides public agencies. While there exist
several drawbacks to the services of these private-owned firms, I believe
they are eclipsed by the substantial benefits.
On the one hand, it is understandable why people disapprove of medical
treatment provided by profit-makers. The key rationale is attributed to the
expensive equipment used in these hospitals or clinics along with the
exorbitant prices that patients have to cover. Additionally, due to the
major aim of maximizing profits, these firms may raise the costs of their
services such as prescription fees or surgery prices. This may act as a
contributor to the inaccessibility to medical care of people who live under
the poverty line, which prevents them from receiving the most effective
cure.
On the other hand, notwithstanding the aforementioned disadvantages, I
would argue that private healthcare is still an optimal choice for people.
The foremost reason is the large number of experienced practitioners
working in these companies. In order to gain profits, these hospitals also
need to boost their service quality to attract more customers. They spend a
flood of funding on taking on veteran doctors and surgeons aiming to
proving patients with excellent services. Furthermore, the cleanliness of
medical services and the generous capacity of these companies are the
reasons why they are quite popular among people despite the high costs.
Hong Ngoc hospital in Hanoi perfectly exemplifies this choice of patients.
Compared to some public hospital with the overloading and the poor
sanitation, this hospital offers a wide range of sickrooms which are
sterilized daily and a number of considerate staffs, which is equivalent to
the costs.
In conclusion, while the demerits attached to private medical services are
definite, I believe with the number of seasoned doctors and the adequate
cleanliness, these hospitals still have more merits than the negative ones.

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