[Vuong Minh]

Thanks for the comment on my previous essay. I have already fix and this essay will be better, hopefully.

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13/1/2018: People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns?
It is true that in recent years, people in many metropolis have to deal with a host of issues, ranging from pollution to the housing shortage. Although such problems are in dire situation, I would contend that encouraging people to move to regional ares may mitigate them.
There are two primary prolems which are the great concerns among residents of large cities. First, the high volumes of traffic may cause an increase in carbon footprint, leading to the degradation of air quality. In fact, in some metropolis, tons of CO2 emissions have been released into the atmosphere on a daily basis, which is a significant contributor to some severe respiratory diseases such as lung cancer. Second, the overpopulation in many big cities is the main culprit of housing problems. Excessive people migrating into large or central regions for the purpose of landing a job may lead to the formation of slums, such as in Mumbai, the lack of fundametal amenities such as water and sanatation and even an increase in the renting cost. Such adverse issues force people to live in a smal and uncomfortable house and their living standards may be deteriorated.
The government should encourage people to transfer to rural places to ameliorate the aforementioned prolems. One prominent reason is that a decrease in population density could reduce the number of private vehicles in large cities, which, in turn, reduces not only the levels of air polution but also the traffic congestions. For example, in 2014, through a policy of supporting money and houses for any person who voluntarily move from Sydney to other rural areas, the amount of CO2 and nitrogen dioxide emitted from private cars had decreased by 5% according to the Network Times. Moreover, moving to a smaller regional towns means less competitions among job seekers. In other words, it it virtually easy to employees to find a suitable job and make a living in these regions, unlike in the large ones. This merit may reduce the unemployment rate and contribute tremendously to the prosperity of the rural areas.
In conclusion, a dense population and enviromental problem are two major concerns among citizens living in big cities, and it seems to me that the state should propose some measures to encourgae people to move to smaller rural regions.
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[Vuong Minh]

sorry 2 words I mistake areas and problems( typing error)

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There is great progress!

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