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Some people say that the government should not put money on building theatres and sports stadiums. They should spend more money on medical care and education. Do you agree or disagree
It is common that the authorities should provide more funding for healthy care and education services rather than building theatres and sports stadiums. While I accept that, I believe that the government should invest in cinimars and theatres.
On the one hand, it is undoubted that theatres and stadiums have various benefits for resident. Firstly, it is undoubted that theatres and sports stadiums make great contribution to boost tourists. This is because the development of entertainment such as musics, soccers, firms attract more and more tourists. As a result, by using tax from travellers, the authorities have a budget for solving social isues. Secondly, entertainment centers play a vital role in the living of people. Nowadays, theatres and sports stadiums are places where people are able to communicate, enjoy, recharge with there friend, familly affer long time at works or schools.
On the orther hand, there are various reason why the government should spent money on hopitals and schools than entertainment centers. One reason is that there are many people have to survey in under living standards, the residents need the basics demand . If the government provides more money for extend theatres and stadiums, the number of medical and education system is not enough to encourgage for every body. Futhermore, In developing countries, the most problem those face is that illness. In China, for example, there were millions children death annual. The main reason is that they have a limit room and doctors.
In conclusion, it is certainly true that the government should invest money on extend education end health service, but this is by no mean the authorities also invest entertainment centers

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