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Đề bài: Some people think that the governments should give financial support to creative artists such as painters and musicians. Others believe that creative artists should be funded by alternative sources.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People have their own views about art and there are so many ways to support art, support talent artists. There are some ideas suppose the governments should support those craetive artists such as painters and musicians. However, there are also other opinions suggest that alternative sources should raise money for those people. In my opinion, I think the first idea is the most suitable option for art.
Artists who are helped with money by the government have so much advantages. Firstly, the government has plenty of money, they can use various sources to provide artists what they need. Eventually, artists need money to make their products more perfect. Secondly, when they finish their job, the products will be shown to the public easily or even brought to other country to display other creation. Furthermore, the country can also find out more people have intelligence, bring them more chances to show everyone their ability. And because of that, talent artists will love their hometown more, they will dedicate their ability, do anything in their power to contribute the development of the country.
Raising money from many sources is also a good solution for artists. Although it quite hard to finf a fund at the beginning, but when people, the public truly understand the efforts of artists, they will support all themselves for painters, musicians. They share the sympathetic for the situation of the artists, because those artists reveal the real life, they speak for other people who do not lucky like the rich so for that reason all the community will raise money for artists.
Every music product or painting reflect the feeling of the artist about the world, their interesting angle of view and may be there are some lessons behind those creation. It will be wonderful if society can stand up together to donate large sums to all the artists so they can have more opportunities to spread far and wide their spirit.
In conclusion, supporting finance to proficient artists is a right thing to do and that job is essential for the government. Only then would the artists work harder to make the country become better.

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