Chữa bài IELTS Task 2
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Topic: Too much emphasis on going university for academic study.People should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified tradespeople such as electricians or plumbers. To what extent do you agree or disagree.?
In recent years, the idea of pursuing academic background has strongly influenced many young people in making their decision for future career path. Some argue that more students should be encouraged to do vocational training instead. Personally, I agree with this point of view.
On the one hand, although there are reasons why getting to college or university is attractive to people, the labor market for academic students is extremely competitive in today world. Firstly, it is recognized that people possess bachelor degree have more chances for a higher position in a company than those who do not. Moreover, a long-term job in an office is also ideally for persons who look for a stable life. Nonetheless, the redundant in number of university students have deterred many graduated ones from seeking for employment. This has prompted an increase in unemployment rate which can adversely affect both individuals as well as the society.
On the other hand, skilled workers are essential for adapting social needs. At first, the shortage of qualified workers has prevented many countries from developing their crucial industry. For example, Europe nations are in need of talented mechanics for their manufacturing cars and machines. To solve the problem, they give out many benefits such as better income and greater job promotion to skilled mechanics compared to that for office personnels. If future workers fail to realize signals for job market, they are likely to fall behind in their life.
In conclusion, I believe that career schools should be publicized more so that more people can have more options in choosing what they want to do.[12/13/2017, 7:53:49 PM] Cám ơn các bạn!
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