Chữa bài IELTS Task 2
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The best way to reduce youth crimes is to educate their parents with parental skills. To what extent you agree or disagree?
Youth crime has become one of the most controversial issues recently. Although some people hold an opinion that the only way to tackle this problem is having their parents being trained with parental skills, I would dissent with it as other methods could be applied to address this issue.
On the one hand, is justifiable why educating parents with parental skills could reduce the proportion of youth crime. Firstly, youngsters have a tendency to be affected directly by their parents who are the most adjacent to them. Therefore, the parents who are equipped with parental skills could teach and instruct their how to be an admired people and avoid from conducting a crime. Furthermore, some adolescents seem to just obey and follow the instructions of their parent. Hence, parents should have parental skills in order to have the most appropriate teaching skills which could keep their children away from conducting a crime. Therefore, crime rate could be reduced if parents are educated with parental skills.
On the other hand, I would argue that we could decline the youth crimes by applying other methods. Initially, the government could impose some laws and regulations which include strict punishments for young people who break the laws. As the result, the crime rate might decrease thanks to these strict punishments. Furthermore, the school should be responsible for reducing the youth crimes since it is the place where students are taught about the code of conduct. Schools could also teach students about the applied laws so that they could avoid from conducting a crime. Hence, owing to the efforts of the government and school youth crimes could also decline.
In conclusion, I believe that besides educating parents with parental skills, it is the responsibility of the government and school to lower the youth crime rate.Hi! This is your corrected essay! thanks for trusting us <3
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