• Chữa bài IELTS Task 2

    • phuong

      Participant
      March 14, 2017 at 12:49 am

      Discuss the advantange and disadvantage of giving international aids to poor countries
      ESSAY
      Recently , these underprivileged nations are usually supported by intercontinental funds. Many people suppose that action influences optimisticly in several aspects , whereas others believe it is not completely advantageous to countries being in a difficult situation
      On the one hand , it is essential to do some religions facing poverty a favour. Firstly , the help may positively affect the social economic conditions of their people. More specificially , the starving residents can be survived by some foods purchased with the financial supports. Secondly , generous countries will have a close relationship with others when showing their kind attitudes. Therefore , some of them easily improve various other fields such as avoiding war, coorperating in education, business , …… resulting in healthy development.
      On the other hand , there are a variety of reasons why giving money free of charge to needy regions is sometimes harmful to themselves. One reason is that even that provision indirectly make them spoil and be more dependent on assistance. On account of being supplied money and food for , thinking that they do not have to produce inland materials to expand residents’life. Another reason is that many of the support funds are not strictly of countries’own. It can be predicted that financial provision will be able to be shared partly by the local authority.
      In conclusion , it seems evident that international supports both have plus side and downside on poor countries so it is necessary to consider carefully before raising funds globally.

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    • trucquynhnm

      Member
      March 15, 2017 at 1:39 am

      Feedback của bạn. Keep up the hard work!

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